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IMMORTAL DESIGN

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𝑰'𝒎 𝒂𝒔𝒔𝒆𝒎𝒃𝒍𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒂 𝒕𝒆𝒂𝒎 𝒐𝒇 ALPHA 𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒅𝒆𝒓𝒔 who can handle the weighty responsibility of devouring a Dark Fantasy/Gothic Horror story in the first stages of its existence...

𝒀𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒎𝒊𝒔𝒔𝒊𝒐𝒏, 𝒔𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒍𝒅 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒄𝒉𝒐𝒐𝒔𝒆 𝒕𝒐 𝒂𝒄𝒄𝒆𝒑𝒕 𝒊𝒕:

𝑹𝒆𝒂𝒅 the book and provide feedback so the creation and refinement process can continue.

Share your honest thoughts—even if you don't like it, as long as you try to clarify & add feedback.

𝑨𝒍𝒍 𝑰 𝒂𝒔𝒌 𝒊𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒍𝒐𝒗𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒈𝒆𝒏𝒓𝒆𝒔, 𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒅 𝒗𝒐𝒓𝒂𝒄𝒊𝒐𝒖𝒔𝒍𝒚, and don't share any of the work with friends, family, or third parties.

Sound like your kind of quest? Sign up now! Alpha-readers accepted into the team will be notified before December 20th 2025.

Immortal Design is a Dark Fantasy/Gothic Horror story about trauma and choices. It follows Rhaziël, a creature shaped by Vital Alchemists, who learns that the world, though beautiful and intriguing, is also incredily cruel and filled with the likes of him who have less of a conscience than he does.

Immortal Design, as fits its genre, contains graphic violence, blood & gore, although that is not the main thread of the story. At large, it is a story about emotional development and growth into a being capable of making his own choices.

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Immortal Design ALPHA team guidelines:

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By submitting this form, you agree that upon selection, you will not share any information, parts of the manuscript, or any content shared with you surrounding Immortal Design with others.

Be Thorough, be fair

I do not expect you to pat me on the had with nothing but compliments. Rather, I'd gladly see you pick the manuscript apart and be detailed about your findings. All I ask is that you be honest and that you provide feedback that will, in your opinion, improve the story. By submitting this form, you agree that you will be thorough, but also fair.

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